the pompadour is the source of his great intestinal fortitude

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Aside from what WTP said, I love the expressions all through this page

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Dude I just checked my deviations it felt like two seconds ago and I didn't see this but these comments are older than I thought I looked where is time going?! TIME WARP.

So I am so glad... that we both have waitresses. Because I think you have made the entire waitress-in-a-zombie-apocalypse look good. And this is mostly because you didn't focus on her being a waitress. You made Nat a REAL PERSON and not just a gimmick! The fact we got to see her at home a little bit, and all the little attentions to detail that you include, the little motions, the expressions, really paint us a picture of her before and after the trauma.

Plus I think lots of people did the whole OH NO MY BOYFRIEND/GIRLFRIEND thing but... I don't know. Yours is fucking special. She knows he is alive at the moment but injured. It's easy to leave a dead body. What do you do when the person is right there alive? That's some thought.

I know you maybe crunched for time a bit at the end, so yes there are some anatomy offs here and there and the coloring kinda drops off but TIME IS TIME GIRLFRAN and overall I really really like this.

YOU SEE I TOLD YOU I LOVED IT ENOUGH!

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and in that moment, the world was no longer empty, when
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I LOVE YOU SEPH YOU ARE SO SUPER HELPFUL AND WONDERFUL THANK YOU ;;

Also the color fadeout was supposed to be like all gradual and stuff, like all the happiness (cheesy shit right there) was being drained out of it all. But. PROCRASTINATION RUINS END PRODUCTS SOMETIMES.

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Make tea, not war.

Now that the color fadeout is pointed out to me and I know that it is not just, like, due to time crunch... I really like it. c: I SEE WHAT YOU ARE DOING THERE!

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and in that moment, the world was no longer empty, when
all that I had in it was you and a gut feeling ... O31.net

Even tiny man's ass is angry.

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